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©2008-2009 `tracie76
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Part One [link]

Critiques


:icontreeclimber:
I couldn't begin to express my appreciation for the expression of this girl! An excellent realization of the nursery rhyme.

Although, for the intensity of the image, the dark colors are very dark, which help the emotion of the photo, but the lighter areas are very light, and not in a sense of sunlight. Her left arm is almost washed out, but too blue of a tint to feel like sunlight. Consider bringing the lighter tones down just a little and bringing the hues closer to magenta/yellow to even out the boldness of her hair and the spider.

If this was an intended pose, and not so much a natural reaction/surprise to the model, she should clench her fingers around the bowl and spoon, as they are loosely placed and do no share the expression of the face.
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:iconkajika-san:
Positively darling!

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I ABUSE EXCLAMATION POINTS!!!
:w00t:
:iconrazorgypsy:
awww! Her expression is GREAT!!

<3

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Love is like a box of chocolates, life's great and every thing's dandy, then it's empty.
And what's worse is now you're addicted.

*SoDiscO ~Chemical-Princess *SlyFoxStock So-Disco.net
:iconstep-into-liquid-516:
You're so lucky to have a little girl who is willing to do all these silly things. :giggle:

My nieces and nephews run for the hills when I bring out the camera.

Her expression is absolutely priceless.


--
Jakob Kai Armstrong

You can find your way
Through the rhythm of the rain.
:iconwoodpear:
Oh, Mother dear, you have met your match as a model. :D
:icontracie76:
:rofl: We had so much fun creating this one .... many many of laughs:giggle:

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Be Yourself
For Everyone Else Is Taken :heart:


My Stock Account =Tracie76Stock
:icontracie76:
That spider jumps!.... we found it in a second hand shop and it has a little lead and a pump at the end and when you pump it it jumps! Juju screamed when I first showed her at the shops she wanted nothing to do with it :lol: now she loves it

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Be Yourself
For Everyone Else Is Taken :heart:


My Stock Account =Tracie76Stock
:iconasinine-arsenic:
her expression ! ahhh so priceless and perfect, the spider is cute in its own way too :giggle: great job !

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P L U R
[that is just the way we are]

everything is beautiful, let the music carry you
maybe i will follow you forever, ever

nowhere else i'd rather be, when you're lying next to me
let the music carry us together, together

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Jan 8, 2008, 10:16:41 AM

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