I couldn't begin to express my appreciation for the expression of this girl! An excellent realization of the nursery rhyme.
Although, for the intensity of the image, the dark colors are very dark, which help the emotion of the photo, but the lighter areas are very light, and not in a sense of sunlight. Her left arm is almost washed out, but too blue of a tint to feel like sunlight. Consider bringing the lighter tones down just a little and bringing the hues closer to magenta/yellow to even out the boldness of her hair and the spider.
If this was an intended pose, and not so much a natural reaction/surprise to the model, she should clench her fingers around the bowl and spoon, as they are loosely placed and do no share the expression of the face.
Although, for the intensity of the image, the dark colors are very dark, which help the emotion of the photo, but the lighter areas are very light, and not in a sense of sunlight. Her left arm is almost washed out, but too blue of a tint to feel like sunlight. Consider bringing the lighter tones down just a little and bringing the hues closer to magenta/yellow to even out the boldness of her hair and the spider.
If this was an intended pose, and not so much a natural reaction/surprise to the model, she should clench her fingers around the bowl and spoon, as they are loosely placed and do no share the expression of the face.
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